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Spying by PeytonJune Spying by PeytonJune
Trying to do something a little less cute-sy here. I realized I've been drawing a lot of couples lately (Hey, I'm a fifteen year old girl after all) So I thought I'd go for a different vibe.

Comments and critiques are appreciated!
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HeavenhairSixes Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's a lovely expression! I like imagining what might be going on in pictures like these...
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Luminela Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hm. Well, first off, I think you should study perspective. Andrew Loomis did some helpful tutorials on that, and they can be found here: [link] It would definitely help with that pillar.

I think that doing studies from life would benefit you as well. Start small, with simple objects like a ball or a square to get the hand of how light works on different forms. Right now there's really no range in value, so there is no form being expressed and everything looks flat.

It's a sweet concept and I think that with time and work, it can be improved immensely!
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Pryce14 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love the minimalism to this. It's a great concept. A more concrete sense of perspective would definitely help with pulling it off. You can do this by making sure the lines of the bricks all go back to the appropriate vanishing points. Also, a bit more contrast would help as well. Otherwise, nice job!
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aquashiram14 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
In the description of your artwork, PLEASE include the REASON why you want this to be critiqued by the admins. Then we can give you a more useful critique! Thank you :)
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Raqonteur Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha. Cute.

The essence of childhood :)
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